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Friendship...POETRY by ~x-escapevelocity-x:iconx-escapevelocity-x:

Categories Contests > 2008 > I Spy > Literature Submissions


One last chance, one hope
I live or I die, your choice
Just pull the trigger
©2008-2009 ~x-escapevelocity-x
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Submitted: February 17, 2008
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for the I spy contest.
this is the story between 2 people, you can interpret it in many ways..

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haiku?
my first poety on DA, i wrote this a longgg time ago.
tell me what you think.
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*Heiderich-Luvur:iconHeiderich-Luvur: Feb 17, 2008, 3:50:51 PM
I really love it combined with the title. It can indeed be interpreted in so many ways and I love poetry like this.

:rose:

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"A piñata, huh? So, you think of me as something bright and cheerful full of toys and candy for young children. Thank you! That makes me feel... much better about our relationship."
~x-escapevelocity-x:iconx-escapevelocity-x: Feb 17, 2008, 3:52:28 PM
thank you so much !
also for the :+fav: :)
*msklystron:iconmsklystron: Mar 6, 2008, 1:45:36 PM
This haiku does work on a few levels. Very clever! It's also a proper haiku and tightly written. It's also a comment on the trust and responsibility in relationships/ friendships. It reflects the ultimate intimacy involved -- one's very existence.

You have a wonderful gallery and you're Canadian!!! I can see how you're experimenting and growing as an artist. Many of your photos seem to tell stories, but this is the only piece of writing in your gallery. Is there more? If not, you should write more.:)

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Stop popping that bubble wrap and check out *ThePurpleNurple
“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
~x-escapevelocity-x:iconx-escapevelocity-x: Mar 6, 2008, 7:48:41 PM
i do have more but i don't know, i'm very personal with what i write :shy:
*msklystron:iconmsklystron: Mar 6, 2008, 9:46:06 PM
That's okay.

The way I see it, sharing subjective points of view (arts) is one way we humans can understand others and ourselves. However, some things are just too personal to share.

Anyhow, anything personal in my writing is buried deep in layers of fantasy and humour.

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Stop popping that bubble wrap and check out *ThePurpleNurple
“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
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