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One last chance, one hope
I live or I die, your choice
Just pull the trigger
©2008-2009 *x-escapevelocity-x
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for the I spy contest.
this is the story between 2 people, you can interpret it in many ways..

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haiku?
my first poety on DA, i wrote this a longgg time ago.
tell me what you think.

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:iconheiderich-luvur:
I really love it combined with the title. It can indeed be interpreted in so many ways and I love poetry like this.

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The above post has been approved by Psi Corps.
Looks like someone's set their phaser to stunning!
:iconx-escapevelocity-x:
thank you so much !
also for the :+fav: :)
:iconmsklystron:
This haiku does work on a few levels. Very clever! It's also a proper haiku and tightly written. It's also a comment on the trust and responsibility in relationships/ friendships. It reflects the ultimate intimacy involved -- one's very existence.

You have a wonderful gallery and you're Canadian!!! I can see how you're experimenting and growing as an artist. Many of your photos seem to tell stories, but this is the only piece of writing in your gallery. Is there more? If not, you should write more.:)

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Stop popping that bubble wrap and check out *ThePurpleNurple
“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
:iconx-escapevelocity-x:
i do have more but i don't know, i'm very personal with what i write :shy:
:iconmsklystron:
That's okay.

The way I see it, sharing subjective points of view (arts) is one way we humans can understand others and ourselves. However, some things are just too personal to share.

Anyhow, anything personal in my writing is buried deep in layers of fantasy and humour.

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Stop popping that bubble wrap and check out *ThePurpleNurple
“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.

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